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Thursday, November 11, 2010

 

An old secret promise

This past Tuesday evening I went to hear poets Timothy Young and Thomas Smith read from their work. It was, in part, a publication reading for recent books by each of the poets: Herds of Bears Surround Us by Timothy Young (Red Dragonfly Press, 2010), and The Foot of the Rainbow by Thomas R. Smith (Red Dragonfly Press, 2010). It was one of the great poetry readings I've been to in many years.

I've known Tim Young as a friend since sometime in the early 1980's. I've known Thomas less well perhaps, though we've been friendly acquaintances and poet colleagues for upwards of twenty years. The reading took place at The Loft, a literary center in downtown Minneapolis, in a large renovated warehouse space that also houses the Coffee Gallery, the offices of Milkweed Editions, and the Minnesota Center for Book Arts. Whenever I've walked into the building (on a busy truck route on the northern edge of downtown Minneapolis), the first thing I notice is the pervasive smell of fresh-sawed wood, which seems never to have left the place since the renovation was done.

Maybe two dozen people showed up to hear the reading, a decent turnout for two poets not graced (or shrouded) with corporate grants and sponsorship. Lively excitement played around the room. Someone from the Loft staff made some brief remarks, and then Scott King, publisher of Red Dragonfly Press, introduced both of the readers. (By way of full disclosure, I should perhaps mention here that Red Dragonfly Press is also the publisher of several of my books of poems.) The reading itself took place in the Loft's main theater, bare brick walls and bare wood floors and free-standing chairs, well lit, with a podium and mike in front.

Tim Young read first, for a half hour or so, then Thomas Smith read, again for about a half hour; then, following the plan they'd devised, they took turns each reading one poem, a poem rodeo (as Tim called it), trading poems back and forth for 15 or 20 minutes to finish the evening. Tim's style of reading was fairly straight-from-the-hip, gritty and largely unsentimental though deeply felt. Thomas's manner was softer, quieter, reflective and touched with sadness. I felt both of them connecting warmly with the audience.

I'll quote a few passages from the poems of Tim and Thomas, to give some of the flavor of their work. All quoted passages here are from the two books noted above.

From the poem "Snow Has Fallen," by Tim Young:

I watch the chickadees flit
from stem to dead stem.
They pick at weed seeds
and sing against the cold.
A chickadee warrior
is the bravest of all.
He defends his kin
against any large thing.

He is steadfast -- courageous --
And in the worst winter he won't flee.
Gray, white and black, he's beauty
with only three tones of his color. [...]

[...] Even in a blizzard he finds a refuge.
He tucks himself in and waits
for what is impossible to defy,
to pass.

I've watched the gray day
arrive out of black dawn.
Snow begins again. The lawn's white.
The sky's white, and if it weren't for
the gray trees and chickadees,
I wouldn't know where earth stops
and sky begins.

And from "Darkness in the Rear View Mirror" by Thomas Smith:

New snow dusts its veil over the freeway.
Moist air diffuses the suburban glow.
Windshield wipers flap their wings, flightless birds.
A semi studded with carnival bulbs
flashes quickly behind, then showboats past.

Comforting shadows return, the dashboard
dials brighten, the rear view mirror lays
its black bar across the field of vision.
Ahead of me, safely distant, tail-lights
lantern a faint reddish trail to follow.

Many of the poems that both poets read were poems of the natural world, infused with the lakes and streams and fields of the northern plains, the far-reaching trees of the north woods, living creatures tiny and gargantuan. Poems also of deep human pain and want, of the great opening and sustaining of love.

Tim Young, from the poem "The Moment is Near":

Today, Ruth,
who's dying of cancer,
moved into Mary's house --
her hospice for the end. [...]

[...] The snow-field run-off plunges
beneath Mary's driveway bridge
and in minutes that water
will spill into the Big River.

Along the backwater
more than fifty eagles perch,
prepared for a long flight north.
As soon as the last black ice

dissolves on the lake
they'll fly to their high, stick-nests
in the mysterious white pine groves
we've only heard of.

And the moment is near.

And then Thomas Smith, from "A Rite of Spring," a short poem about a garden club sale held the Armory building in a small town:

Faces, fresh and airy as the flats of
geraniums and zinnias, a partial
reply to the song of Pete Seeger, ninety
years old last week. Maybe someday,
at least a little because of him, the armories
of this world "gone to flowers every one."

Tim Young talked a little about having worked for several years at the juvenile prison at Red Wing, Minnesota, helping inmate with learning life skills, moral judgement, and anger management. It can be easy to forget that these things have real weight in the world, quite apart from the psychological and sociological language the prison bureaucracy uses to talk about them. Tim mentioned that for about five years, most of the teenage boys he worked with were sex offenders, and had themselves been victims of abuse (sexual and otherwise). One of the sections of Tim's book is made up of poems coming out of his experience working at the prison. From the poem "An Inmate Weeps on His Math Test":

A week into his recidivist sentence,
something's moving inside him,
through his mind,
through the fisty muscle in his throat,
through his tear ducts,
then over his shivering lips.

I slide a box of tissues to him.
My work is to be nearby,
correct his tests, send my words
halfway across his table,
and wait.

I think of the elections of last week, the hysterical ignorance and repugnant cynical greed manifesting into precinct maps and vote counts, polyester jackets and prepared speeches, money changing hands in backrooms and cheerleader smiles for the cameras. Among the hordes of opportunist hacks and deal-cutting operatives abroad on the land, could any among them comprehend a moment of real human vulnerability such as is described in the lines above?

During the reading Thomas Smith mentioned, at one point, mentioned the elections, the frequent conversations he'd had in the past week where people kept talking about the election results. "The fact is," he said, with deep quiet sadness, "that as a result of the elections last week, people will die, around the world and here in this country."

From Thomas's poem "A Homemade World":

Many people salvage bricks
from their childhood homes.
They nail the old framed
prejudices above the fireplace.

They can't see out their windows
because they've recycled the smoked
glass of fear. Even their
books keep out light.

If you build with only
the things you've made your own,
a friendliness toward living
warms you like a patchwork quilt.

If you build your world-house
with toxic cast-offs, there's some
poison everywhere you turn.
And if you build your country

with bombs and oil instead of
wheat and schools -- you can't help it,
you'll just go on electing
Disaster as your president.

The poems and books of Tim Young and Thomas Smith include, among their many tunings and textures, moments and movements of grace and tenderness, intimacy and embracing light. I'll finish here with passages from one more poem from each poet. First, from Tim Young's poem "An Evening So Beautiful":

An evening so beautiful even the moon has envy.
She throws off her see-through gown
and so begins our love affair in the garden.

Where the rainbow faded at sunset
new stars emerge the way
lavender sprouts from the soil. [...]

[...] then our hearts spin, slowly,
in the shadow of a blooming catalpa.

Its white petals drop
like warm pearls from the lips
of our private goddess.

A wide-eyed doe, slender to her flank,
flicks her tail, flutters her lashes,
then bounds away with the grace of a swaying lily.

And Thomas Smith, from the poem "The Return," which begins with a quote from the Koran, "Unto Him all things return."

Burning clear with all
heat and strength befitting
the day of its longest dominion,
the sun, boiling from that
high nest of foliage,
lit a silver swath
of sparkling, dew-bent

grasses all the way down
the drenched slope.
So brilliant was that carpet
of light the sun unrolled
down the hill to our feet,
we stopped where we were
and sat a while in pure wonder.

And I remembered an old
secret promise, deemed
unwise to speak, though
who could deny it,
seeing these folk, humble
yet adorned, nodding together
on their way back to the sun?

And soon enough we got up
again and wandered on
into whatever we had to do
on that day, though not unchanged,
having accompanied a little distance
on the morning road of their return
those illuminated pilgrims.

***

Tim Young's website is here. Thomas Smith's website is here. The links in the first paragraph above go to the Red Dragonfly Press webpages for each of the books quoted from in this blogpost; the main page for the Red Dragonfly Press website is here. I invite you to go and look.

 

# posted by Lyle Daggett @ 9:28 PM

Comments:

Thank you so much for this wonderful post. I am not familiar with the work of these poets but given what you've shared here - and their words are marvelous - I will visit their sites and look for their books. Theirs is poetry I could read all day. . . and be deeply moved.

# posted by Blogger Maureen : 1:37 PM, November 12, 2010

 

I attended the reading and find that you evoke the setting and tone of the evening with precision, as well as giving salient examples of each poet's work. Thanks for this fine post.

# posted by Blogger Mary F. : 11:24 PM, November 17, 2010

 

 

 

NEW, NEW, NEW, NEW!!!

PULSE on OA2 Jazz Records

Daniel Cavanagh and the Jazz Emporium Big Band

with Timothy Young’s poetry and narration.



Dan Cavanagh makes his recording debut as a leader with this striking big-band date. One of the challenges young bandleaders face is tackling a program of original material with supporting musicians who also aren't widely known, but Cavanagh quickly makes it apparent that he not only writes challenging and interesting charts, but his superb players give their all in tackling them, while the leader takes relatively few solos for himself at the piano. "Having Built in Deeper Water" is a majestic opener, a modern mini-suite with superb solos by soprano saxophonist Randy Hamm and trumpeter Scott Harrell. The tense "Tunnel Vision" is full of rich color=, while the ominous "Black Rattle" showcases drummer Stockton Helbing and Harrell. The three-part "Mississippi Ecstasy" is a valiant effort to blend jazz with Timothy Young's poetry, though spoken words mixed with jazz remain an acquired taste, at least Young is speaking rather than screaming, while his poetry is well above what passes for it on other jazz CDs. This auspicious debut should open doors for Dan Cavanagh…………      ALLMUSIC.COM
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Tracks:

1 HAVING BUILT IN DEEPER WATER 7:22
2 PULSE 5:15
3 MISSISSIPPI ECSTASY, Movement 1 3:10
4 MISSISSIPPI ECSTASY, Movement 2 5:40
5 MISSISSIPPI ECSTASY, Movement 3 5:57
6 TUNNEL VISION 6:00
7 NORTH SOUTH 7:12
8 BLACK RATTLE 8:30
9 A TIME OF RECKONING 7:
33

 

Dan Cavanagh Jazz Emporium Big Band

(saxes)

 Tim Ishii Randy Hamm  Ed Peterson  Steve Owen  Glenn Kostur
(trumpets)

John Adler Scott Harrell Ken Edwards Alcedrick Todd Rick Stitzel
(trombones)
Steve Wiest Jonathan Woodrow Steven Dunn Matt Ingman
Dan Cavanagh (conducting and piano/B3)
James Miley (conducting and piano) Dave Hagedorn (vibes)

Brian Mulholland (bass) Stockton Helbing (drums) Jim Yakas (percussion)
Timothy Young (poetry and narration
)

 

Composer and arranger Dan Cavanagh pulls together a creative ensemble of musicians from around the country for his new release, "Pulse." A runner up in the 2005 ASCAP Young Jazz Composer's Competition, Cavanagh's writing & arranging covers wide expanses through this big band concept album, often interspersed by the readings and poetry of Timothy Young. With shades of Jim McNeely, and hints of Bob Florence, Cavanagh's writing is engaging from the very beginning as he captures the spirit of the music with a patience and maturity that fits neatly in the continuum of modern large ensemble composers, from Gil Evans through Maria Schneider. Cavanagh is currently Assistant Professor of Music at the University of Texas at Arlington.

 

 

 

A NEW RELEASE—Now Available—SPOKEN WORD WITH MUSIC

 

 

SNOW HAS FALLEN by YOUNG & YATA

Sample now at http://cdbaby.com/cd/youngandyata

 

 

Early Praise for SNOW HAS FALLEN

 

          In a truly artistic fashion, Yata and Young weave a musi-poetic fabric in which the combined whole is greater than the sum of its parts. Unlike other's attempts at the melding of poetry and music, neither artists' material takes overwhelming precedence, resulting in a beautiful unity of purpose and intent which seeps through on many levels. This is a wonderful recording, and The "Musician Married" is very touching. You should listen with wide-open ears.

                                  …..Dan Cavanagh, jazz composer, pianist, big band leader, Arlington, Texas

                                               Sea Breeze Jazz label recording artist of Pulse, 2008

 

           

           For decades Timothy Young has pursued the music of poetry, while Yata Peinovich’s songwriting has consistently showcased a poet's sensibility. What luck for us listeners that these two heart-minstrels should meet and combine their talents in this deeply felt and richly modulated collection of poem-songs. Their unique delivery, equal parts rocksalt and honey, is as refreshing and joyful as a drive through Wisconsin's Mississippi River bluff country in late spring.
                                   …..Thomas R. Smith,
poet & musician, River Falls, Wisconsin
                                                                author of Waking before Dawn,  2007

 

            We know that Timothy Young is some kind of rare Irish Tiger, semi-mythical, with a fondness for kindling and heading out of town before dawn. His poetry has the sharpened tips of a hunter, but he laces the stalk of his arrows with honeysuckle and brandy, so that we make ourselves willing targets. He is an emerging and brilliant performer of the spoken word, and carries something very ancient with him.
           
SNOW HAS FALLEN is a raw, deep and precious thing. Its top branches are singed by firebirds wings and its roots are in ancient clay. Sell the car, make love by rivers, befriend impossible odds-its messages take hold like a heavy wine your grandmother warned you about.
            Young and Yata are soulful outlaws giving away treasure from the Temple.  This CD is absolutely superb-My Heart is Your Home is going to become the anthem of some kind of new movement just stirring in the land. There is something new happening here, I sense trouble. Best record of 2008 I'll wager.

                ….Martin Shaw, mythologist, storyteller & musician, Devon, UK

                                                                author of  A Branch from the Lightning Tree,  2008      

          

            These are poems rooted in the realities of life; poems that do not flinch from the truth, but look deeply into it to find nourishment and joy. The best work here has both grit and shine, and recklessly seeks beauty among the scars. I love Pilgrimage especially, a terrific piece.

                                     ….Jay Leeming, poet & musician, Ithaca, New York

                                                                author of Dynamite on a China Plate, 2006

 

             The best of Tim Young's poems read as though they have been written by a geographer who has just emerged from mapping the interior bones of the earth…..His words are set off brightly by the soulful and sparkling music of Yata Peinovich…….. Take a walk on the bright side of the moon with the poems and music of Timothy Young, Yata Peinovich and friends.

                                     …..Lyle Daggett, poet and publisher of the blog A Burning Patience,

 

from the poetry  blog……..

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"And, in the dawn, armed with a burning patience, we shall enter the splendid cities." -- Arthur Rimbaud

Tuesday, May 06, 2008

 

And sing against the cold

In the mail last week came Snow Has Fallen, a CD of poems and songs by Timothy Young and Yata Peinovich. I've known Tim Young for many years by now; this was my first introduction to Yata Peinovich. The poems and music on this disk are a great pleasure and delight to listen to.

Whether reading his work on the page or hearing him read it out loud, I've always liked Tim Young's willingness to let go of all harnesses, cast away fear, and jump into a poem all at once. He has written much about the joy and difficulty in men and women trying to relate with each other, the heat and the coolness, the great dance and, sometimes, the wound. Many of his poems reach into the connections between deep pain and intimacy and the public events and occasions of the larger world.

 

If someone touched you wrongly,
if you weep through the night
if your life is a river of sadness
MY HEART IS YOUR HOME,
MY HEART IS YOUR HOME,
If brown clouds are rising and the sun's fading too fast
If the water's dark and angry
If you're losing your work, your children are crying
If your home is no longer your castle
If you don't own your soul
If you're looking for a way out
If you're ready to hold and be held
MY HEART IS YOUR HOME,
YOUR HEART IS MY HOME ...

(From the poem "My Heart Is Your Home" on the above CD.)

Over the years, here in Minneapolis, I've taken part in various poetry writing and performing groups, sometimes impromptu, sometimes organized with intention. I've lost count of the number of times I've gathered with poet friends in a church basement, a small bookstore, a hippie cafe after closing time, to read poems and beat and tap on various drums and bells and woodblocks, improvising our way through another joyfully disheveled night. Bare pipes and concrete walls and thinned-out rugs, a used couch in the corner on its last legs. Tim was frequently among us in our mixed-bag gatherings. I recall one evening at the Seward Cafe on East Franklin Avenue in Minneapolis when he showed up with a buffalo bone he'd found in a gravel pit somewhere outside the city. He used it to thump on a large round drum all evening.

The old man pulls the blues
from deep in the earth
His licks are twinkling
like old sea fossils
asleep in a limestone bed.
There's no traffic in this small town
so I stand in the middle of the street
The moon's a bone over the road.
Tonight no dogs will sleep.

(From the poem "Best Blues," again from the CD Snow Has Fallen.)

The best of Tim Young's poems read as though they have been written by a geographer who has just emerged from mapping the interior bones of the earth. My thanks to Tim for sending the disk of poems and song. His words are set off brightly by the soulful and sparkling music of Yata Peinovich (vocals and guitars), Bruce Hecksel (guitars, bass and percussion), Dalyce Elliott playing exquisite violin, and the various others who have contributed.

Take a walk on the bright side of the moon with the poems and music of Timothy Young, Yata Peinovich and friends.

 

# posted by Lyle Daggett @ 8:23 PM

 

From left, poet Timothy Young, songwriter Bryce Black and guitarist Yata Peinovich have released two albums, "Snow Has Fallen" and "Sheer Caffeine."

Staff photo by Troy Espe

 

Mixing it up

By Troy Espe

Leader-Telegram staff

Arkansaw guitarist Yata Peinovich has collaborated on two new albums with two different styles.

"Snow Has Fallen" is a spoken-word album that navigates the aging process. "Sheer Caffeine" extols the versatility of baler twine.

Although subject matters differ, the albums showcase gifted songwriters, Peinovich said.

"Both of them are masterful with words," he said. "We're really happy with the results."

Peinovich, 55, recorded "Snow Has Fallen" with Minnesota poet Timothy Young. The disc contains 11 spoken poems set to background music. Peinovich sings on three tracks.

The album addresses relationships, love and grief.

"They all deal with being an older man in this culture," said Young, 58, of Bloomington.

Young wrote the lyrics while Peinovich composed the music. The men met to sync notes and verses.

"It was a pure collaboration," said Young, formerly of Stockholm. "All the poems are structured as song, which is unique for spoken word."

"Snow Has Fallen" is Young's second poetry CD. He taught juveniles at the Minnesota Correctional Facility in Red Wing before retiring in 2004.

Peinovich recorded "Sheer Caffeine" with Arkansaw songwriter Bryce Black. The disc contains novelty songs about mad cow disease and dinosaur chickens.

Black didn't settle for cheap laughs, he said.

"A lot of the songs have a satirical element," he said. "The wordplay is fairly sophisticated. There are lot of images and metaphors that are not trite."

Black, 56, delves into contemplative issues on songs such as "Loving the Questions" and "Stone Goose."

"We get the ridiculous and the sublime," said Black, who restores windmills on a 60-acre farm. "That's who I am."

Black wrote the lyrics and melodies. He also sings on the album. Peinovich provides guitar, mandolin and vocal harmonies.

Both albums were recorded at Cricket Studios in Maiden Rock. Studio owner Bruce Hecksel, who is half of the popular folk duo Patchouli, mixed the CDs and played several instruments on the two discs.

"There's a river theme," Peinovich said. "We could look out the window when we were recording, and we could see the Mississippi."

Peinovich, Young and Black are longtime friends. They often played together during White Pine open mic shows in Downsville.

Peinovich, who has recorded seven albums and played on "A Prairie Home Companion" radio show, approached Young and Black about making the albums.

"Sheer Caffeine" was released in February. "Snow Has Fallen" came out this month. The three men are holding concerts to promote the CDs.

"It was one of those happy accidents," Peinovich said. "The main thing for me is working with great lyrics. That's why I like working with these two guys."

 

 

 

 

 

Jazz studies produces a ‘Pulse’

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Written by Zabrina Ransom, The Shorthorn Scene writer   

Wednesday, 05 March 2008 07:19 PM

Assistant professor of Music Dan Cavanagh, foreground,

listens to playback of a vocal overdub recorded by poet,

Timothy Young, background, on Monday at Crystal Clear

Studios in Dallas. Cavanagh's band, the Jazz Emporium

Big Band, is recording tracks for their first album.

The Shorthorn: Michael Rettig


   With his son cradled in his arms, Dan Cavanagh walks into his office and hands him to his mother-in-law.
A keyboard, PBS home video on jazz, music sheets and other material that accent his career as a musician

and professor cluttered his office.
    It’s a busy schedule for the jazz studies assistant director and music assistant professor. His day continued

when he picked up musicians from the airport that afternoon to play in his latest project.
    The musicians and a poet came to record a big band jazz album Sunday as part of the Dan Cavanagh Jazz Emporium

Big Band, a group Cavanagh recently formed.
    The album, releasing next fall, is mostly instrumental with the exception of a poet’s spoken word and features

original compositions that Cavanagh wrote. The title, Pulse, came from one of the songs he wrote for Virginia Tech University.

Assistant professor of Music Dan Cavanagh, left,

goes over tracks recorded for his band's album

with visiting assistant professor Micah Hayes, right,

at Crystal Clear Studios. The band's album,

tentatively titled Pulse, will be the first album

Cavanagh has released on a record label.

The Shorthorn: Michael Rettig


   
“As a musician, my research involves creative activity like playing concerts and writing music, and this is a combination of a two-year project that I have been working on,” Cavanagh said. For him, the album brings entertainment and academic work.    “It’s part of my scholarly activities,” he said. “That’s not the only thing, of course.”
     The band comprises 22 musicians including saxophone player Tim Ishii, music associate professor and jazz studies director, and others on trombone, trumpet, piano and bass drums. The group performed eight songs on the album.

   
Some band members worked with Cavanagh during his years as a traveling jazz musician. Others attended college with him and two are his former teachers.
     Cavanagh’s uncle Tim Young, retired teacher and poet from Minnesota, recited his poem with the working title, “Mississippi Ecstasy,” over music on the album. The poem is based on a trip to the Mississippi River he took in 2006.
     Though Young performed with music for at least 25 years, he said this was the first time he had read his poetry with a jazz Big Band.
“I wanted to be apart of that cutting edge of jazz,” he said.
     Ishii collaborated with Cavanagh in choosing which musicians would best suit the album. The two have played together many times before this project.
    “It’s just a great honor to be included,” Ishii said.
     The professionals are not alone. Aspiring musicians also have a hand in the project — two trombone players are students.
     Music senior Haley Kitts studied with Cavanagh for three semesters and said he influenced her jazz writing. One of her pieces premiered at the Texas Music Educators Association Convention and she said it wouldn’t have been written without his help.“I think that he is extremely innovative,” she said. “His music is along the line of modern jazz.”
    Pulse is the first record Cavanagh made that was signed to a record label, Sea Breeze Jazz Records. He has been part of other musical projects including The Dan Cavanagh Trio, a piano trio he led in the Metroplex accompanied by a drummer and bassist and The Dan Cavanagh Ensemble, a jazz and creative music group.
“This isn’t your swing jazz music of the 1940s anymore,” Cavanagh said. “There’s some rock influences, some classical influences as well as the traditional jazz influences.”

 

Four musicians and a poet create a special performance

Story by: Elizabeth White  Contributor to The Shorthorn

The Shorthorn: Megumi Rooze
Timothy Young left, recites poetry as Jazz Studies
Director Tim Ishii, right, and Dan Cavanagh, jazz
studies assistant director, provide music Thursday
at Irons Recital Hall.
    The sound of drums and a bass guitar pounded like the rhythm of a heartbeat through Irons Recital Hall as four musicians and a poet performed Thursday night.
    Poet Timothy Young recited from his collection of poems as a jazz quartet played original music composed by Dan Cavanagh, assistant director of jazz studies, for 50 people. They played 10 pieces during the hour-long performance.
    Tim Ishii, associate professor and jazz studies director, played several saxophones throughout the night and UTA alumnus Jaime Reyes played drums to accompany the poet.
     International business junior Chris Carfa, who played bass for the concert, described the performance as experimental. He said Ishii asked him to play for the concert because he is in the Jazz Orchestra and a family friend. Carfa, 21, started playing bass about 10 years ago.
    Poet and musicians traded the spotlight throughout the performance, some pieces instrumental, others just poetry. One piece, titled “A Small Harmonica,” featured Ishii on soprano saxophone as Young spoke of being a god’s harmonica.
    Music Education sophomore Denise Richards thought the performance was different.
    “If something like this happened again, I would go,” she said.
    The poetry subjects ranged from Young’s work at a juvenile correction facility to crows, kisses and coffee.
    Young acknowledged poets who influenced him, like Walt Whitman. The last piece of the night was “Homage to Whitman.”
    Cavanagh, who composed the music specifically for this performance, said it went well.
    “It was wonderful, even though there were loose moments like any jazz concert,” he said. “I hope there will be more performances like this, but it’s a matter of making it happen.”
   Carfa said the concert was fantastic and that it was a good opportunity to expand his musical experiences.
    “It was great to push the limits on what I’ve done,” he said. “It was odd, but fun.”

 

 

 

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The Thousands Press introduces a book of poems by Timothy Young.


Building in Deeper Water
by Timothy Young

Here's a book full of nourishing darkness: Timothy Young’s Building in Deeper Water. The title comes from a poem about a pair of beavers “who were too young/ [and] built a lodge in the wrong place”, and eventually learned “the way to live…having built in deeper water.” Young is a longtime resident of rural Wisconsin, and earns his living by teaching juvenile offenders at the Minnesota Correctional Facility in Red Wing. He is clearly a man who values depth, and that is evident throughout his book. The poems here frequently take small, daily moments and open them into larger realities. They are lived-through, honest, and rarely overdone. A good example is the closing stanza from his poem “Wild Plum”:

When all the plums are in
you can cook the flesh for jam
and dry the pits for a rattle.
But you still have to live with the thorns.

 

This quiet, soulful manner is one of the books great strengths. The natural world is a constant presence in these poems, whether it’s a pig’s head in a ditch or eagles soaring over a river. Yet the poems feel more “of” than “about” nature, for they do not stand to the side but involve themselves in their subjects. His poem “Walking After Breakfast” begins with a characteristic weaving of the inner and the outer worlds:

 

Sometimes between the cardinal’s first whistle
and the bee’s morning hum,
a man hears the answer to a question
he forgot to ask.

 

It is a pleasure to read poems so involved in the natural world, that do not cross-examine blizzards or oak trees but simply take their own place in the larger universe of which we are all a part. The poem from which the book’s title comes describes how, after diving into the swamp, the beavers “emerge with a sweet root.” Tim Young has done his own diving over the years, and the result is this rich, honest book, full of deeply rooted sweetness.
--Jay Leeming, poet
review in Free Verse, October 2003


                                                           

                                                                                                                      Lake Pepin, Mississippi River, Wisconsin, left and Minnesota, right

Rural Stockholm poet is building in deeper water with the release of new book

Timothy Young of rural Stockholm recently had his book of poems published by The Thousands Press of Minneapolis. The poems, many set in Pepin County and the Mississippi bluff area, examine the deeper relationships the author has with the land, animal life and his family.

The book, Building in Deeper Water, is receiving favorable reviews from established poets and writers. One poem in the selection, A Thread of Sunlight, was included among the Best American Poems of 1999 by Scribner Books.

The nationally recognized poet, Robert Bly, who provided an introduction for the book, writes that this book has a lived life in it. Bly says, This is superb writing about relationships, and such writing is a rare gift among men.

Young writes intimate love poems for his wife. He also writes poems on marriage as a continuing mystery. There are also poems on the nature of marital conflicts. For instance, In the Middle of an Argument he writes:

Here on the bluffs.
we’ve had practice dealing with storms.
I must resist the wind, just a bit,
push against it, and yield slowly,
so we close the door together.

This book teems with wildlife, farm animals, creeks, storms and the natural world, and it honors the physical hardiness necessary for rural life. Thomas Smith of River Falls and a western Wisconsin native says, “Building in Deeper Water welcomes the reader into the preserve of a poet who has built his literary house in the depths of nature and culture.” Smith is the author of three books of poetry and is poetry editor for the nationally renowned Ruminator Review.

Young approaches his subject matter with open eyes. He addresses emotional dilemmas, such as when his wife sends her hand-raised cattle off to slaughter, with a style that is neither maudlin, nor brutish. In the poem, When Hunters Rise, Young compares deer hunters with spiritual men.

So few know this hour as well as hunters maybe monks, surely a prayerful shaman

(The hunter) understands the fundament of life: something dies so another can live. We know this because when night goes to day the sun kills the stars in the sky.

Young also writes quirky poems such as A Wooden Cutout of an Old Woman’s Backside which playfully says that our garden ornaments suggest the nature of our religious beliefs.

In the October issue of Free Verse, a literary publication from Marshfield, Wisconsin, New York poet, Jay Leeming, reviews the book and writes, The poems take small, daily moments and opent them into larger realities. They are lived-through, honest and rarely overdone. Leeming goes on, Youngs gentle, Robert Frost-like way of approaching a subject is to be learned from and admired.

--The Courier-Wedge
Durand
, Wisconsin

November 27, 2003


I'm glad to welcome this book into the community of poets. This book has a "lived life" in it. This is superb writing about relationships, and such writing is a rare gift among men. This man is able to bless nature. There's no rural sentimentality.
--Robert Bly
author of The Night Abraham Called to the Stars



Building in Deeper Water welcomes the reader into the preserve of a poet who has built his literary house in the depths of nature and culture. Tim Young's imagination remains faithful to the body and to earth. Every poem in this powerfully physical first book honors both light and darkness, life and death, the visible worlds and the invisible.
--Thomas Smith
author of The Dark Indigo Current



Books like Tim Young's Building in Deeper Water
might signal the long awaited beginning of a Euro-American awareness for the need to continually prepare feasts…. that feed the Divine Female in Nature.
--Martin Prechtel
author of The Toe Bone and the Tooth:
An Ancient Mayan Story Relived in Modern Times

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This is sophisticated, deeply imaginative poetry done in a distinctly American idiom. In

Building in Deeper Water, by Timothy Young (The Thousands Press) there is a kindness and a wisdom and a generosity of spirit that I deeply admire.  I’ll be keeping this book close at hand for a long time.

--Robert Edwards

author of American Sounds, a book of poems, and the publisher of Pemmican on-line magazine.

 

 

Friday, January 09, 2004, The River Falls Journal

BOOK REPORT: Listen: Hear the written words of the bards, the best way to ‘read’ poetry

By Dave Wood
 

Newspaper book reviewers don’t often review poetry with the same enthusiasm as fiction and non-fiction. There’s a reason for that - actually several reasons.  First, newspapers aim for a large readership and many readers have little interest in poetry, judging from book sales in the various genres.  Second, much poetry these days is not “public” poetry, as was written in the 18th and 19th centuries, when poets celebrated the deaths or the accomplishments of great leaders.  And finally, I suspect that poetry doesn’t yield itself to easy review on the printed page, but shines brighter when experienced aurally.  So today, we’ll celebrate two area poets, one young and one old, by printing a chunk of each poet’s work. So the best way to read this column is to read it aloud to your family, the way poetry should be enjoyed.

 

Our younger poet is Wisconsin teacher Timothy Young, who is accessible and writes poems about ordinary life, as in this poem, “My Wife Loading Her Cattle” from his new book “Building in Deeper Water” (The Thousands Press, $10):

 

Before 5 a.m. in late November

she stepped into the deep mouth of the trailer

and sweetly called to her cattle.

“Come on, boys, look what I have for you.”

Sniffing the metal and blackness before them

twin steers backed away from her beckon.

I squeezed a stall gate against the smaller one’s ribs

‘til he leaped toward her voice and went in.

“Good boy. Good boy.”

The second steer turned and kicked on the pivot,

his brown bulk confused by her words.

He resisted the driver’s twist of his tail

but finally had to jump into darkness.

“It’s OK, baby.”

And his mother offered him corn.

The door trembled, the trailer door slammed,

something rumbled in the muscles and meat.

My wife wept as her Cattle Boys left

to the Watkins Locker in Plum City.

She said nothing more, and neither did I,

then we both drove off to work.”

 



BUILDING IN DEEPER WATER
By Timothy Young
Published by The Thousands Press
68 pages.
$10.00

 

Timothy Young
129 Melbourne Ave SE

Minneapolis, MN 55414
tim@twoboots.net